Martin's new 9/11 song - please circulate

[marndin]

Here is a Music Video that I have recently written and created about the collapse of building 7.

It's currently receiving airplay on a number of radio stations in the States and Canada.

It is also going to be featured in a couple of 9/11 Documentaries!

http://www.911building7.co.uk

Martin

[Light Infantree]

Great tune martin. its now on my ipod and i'll be sure to play it at the WR talk here in Ipswich as a little something to set the mood.

I'd like to hear a really beefy version of that, the lyrics are very well put together.

More, more

[marndin]

BTW

This song is free to use for anyone promoting 9/11 (alternative views).

I should have a finished version within the next three weeks (time permitting).

Contact me for a high quality version, and I will post it to you.

Martin

[paul wright]

Agreed Very artfully composed and the flow of the lyrics doesnt give a merely propagandist feel
Like Light Infantree I feel it needs a more banging treatment to unfold it
Fantastic

[Linda]

Nice 1.

will you put it on u tube?

great lyrics. Cool

[brian]

Brilliant, lets hope Crosby Stills and Nash or Neil Young have the gumption to record it.

[Patrick Brown]

Very professional although I think the lyrics do need to be changed. To make a song popular you shouldn't use negative words like death and kill. You may get away with a more aggressive approach if you did a hard dance tune.

But hey, as said very professional but go for the luvey angle which suits the ballard style and it'll be more easily accepted. Most people won't get all the technical stuff i.e. Fall speeds etc so leave that out.

Here's an idea off the top of my head:
Somebody singing about their lover from one of the towers:

Why I'm dieing I don't know...

Wars no reason...

Will I die for peace or war...

When we (or... and we) stood together in the moonlight...

Together we're gone...

This conspiracy isn't lies it's all about who live and dies... (could be a good hookline)

Best,
p

[fixuplooksharp]

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gawd that was funny. so cheesy. not my typa thing, but hella funny! good production though. It sounds so wierd singing about 9/11 facts. too wierd for words.

[andrewwatson]

First-rate song- very catchy and self-assured. May it go far.

I have just posted it to the Evening Standard comments page and also to www.911blogger.com.

Congratulations.

[Bongo]

marndin, you have a good voice and you are obviously extremely musically talented... and a wise man also

...I just dont get the song? the events of 9/11 make me feel angry, serious etc... The song is just too soft, too melodic maybe? The feel of the song just doesn't match the emotions that one would expect. The lyrics are good, but the tune doesn't fit. The 9/11 songs that I have heard and really get me emotionally charged, fall into two catagories. The first is either rock/metal, banging breaks (Dance music) or hip hop which raise my anger levels at the situation and make a serious political statement... Take "Bin Laden - DJ Green Lantern & Eminem" http://www.911truthla.org/audio/binladen_djgreenlantern.mp3 or "Lies Lies Lies by Ministry" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SwOCu1phcNQ for example. The other way to go is through comedy "George Bush Is - RobTheRub" http://www.myspace.com/robtherub

...Jeesh... I'm sounding like bloody Simon Cowell

[Banish]

well done m8. nice sound! Missing a killer guitar solo to make the neck hairs stand. More emotional impact! Possibly right at the end

[marndin]

[DrJazzz]

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[andrewwatson]

Martin,

I 've listned to a lot and posted it to about five sites including Loose Change Forum , where it went down well, and 911researchers.com, wich is now my main homepage.


If I may just list some plus and minus points for me:


PLUS POINTS

Very slick and attractive production
Nice fresh open voice
Neat rhymes - good chorus
Not too long or too whiny - postive and upbeat
Catchy music


MINUS POINTS

Little too short
Some lyrics don't quite jell - 'Cold War, Bird Flu, WMD' may all be black-ops, but in such a short song stick to 9/11.
Bit too short - another verse about Bush at Booker school maybe ?
Or Northwoods? more relevant than the Liberty or Tonkin?
The song doesn't quite 'get there' There is a nice build through the Bridge although the key change is a bit contrived perhaps - maybe not.
My partner thought it need abigger production with soaring strings.(!)
I would say - end with something really strong and new.

Do you like ABBA a lot?

Good luck - it could go far.

[marndin]

Hi all

Here's the finished version of 9/11 Building 7.

www.songcity.co.uk/911Building7.htm

This is the first mix, so it will probably change after a couple of weeks.

As I mentioned last time. If anyone would like to use it (or part of it) for anything to do with the 9/11 truth campaign. Please get in touch and I'll send you a high quality version.

So far it has achieved my aim, and is being downloaded a fair amount!

Hope you like it

Martin Noakes

[marndin]

Just to let you all know I've uploaded a finished version. I may well end up re-mixing it (I usually do).

http://www.songcity.co.uk/911Building7.htm

Cheers

Martin Noakes

[Bongo]

Hi Martin, Yeah... after some more listening... 'Not too bad '

To be honest, with my love of rock and dance music, it's maybe not personally my cup of tea (style wise) and that's why maybe I can't comment? But full credit to you... you are obviously a dude with a great deal of intelligence and talent. I have downloaded it and might use it on the title screens of some of the 9/11 DVD's I hand out... With your permission of course?

Respect

Bongo.

[marndin]

Bongo..Thanks for the comments, and of course you can use it for whatever you like!

I would just ask that you inform me when you use it and credit me/show the link to the song on my website if possible!

Cheers

Martin

[SilkSpinner]

Hi Martin,
Well done,,,, I like it and so did my Mom(she's not so keen on rap&rock 911 songs) Good lyrics,,, nice a clear.

Thank YOU for the song

[festival of snickers]

hello

just found this board few hours ago

thanks for the music

[Bongo]

Welcome Festival of Snickers....

Are you new to the reality of 9/11 or just to this board?

Regards,

[Busker]

Featured on www.makeblogsnotwar.com and also passed on to other podcasters.

Would be useful if people reported airplay on the thread.

[Banish]

Ah, I just listened to it on cans! Nice mix and great engineering - to whoever done it. I'm gettin a nice warm 70's buzz all over.

[festival of snickers]

[jomel77]

Howdy from Atlanta! Just heard the song on the Calgary 9/11 Truth podcast and FREAKED!!! Searched and found this site and thread. Downloaded the song and now it's on my iPod. The video is just as awesome. My wife saw it and cried - it's that good. Martin, thank you so much for your creativity and generosity.

And to y'all in the UK: I know a lot of you feel us Yanks are pretty dumb, but be patient. More and more of us are waking up everyday.

[disco volante]

easily the most comical mp3 ever to grace the earth.................

good job!

[karlos]

Link

for the younger crowd

[marndin]

I've edited the initial message (1st in this thread) with current news about the song/video.

Thanks for all of your help

Martin

[karlos]

Link


i only just found this video/song

i think this is really cool

i cant stop playing it over and over!!

[karlos]

Song Lyrics:
You told the world Saddam had chemical bombs
To kill us in our homes, and on our farms
You said he sent his men into the heavens
big planes crashing down, September 11

You lied, You lied,
People died, When Bush lied

I've got some questions, wipe that smirk off your face
Betraying your people, that's a real disgrace
See I'm having a hard time finding that plane
that you said hit the Pentagon, bursting into flames
Vapourising the aircraft, didn't leave no remains
But the bodies appear not to burn quite the same

More lies Yeah, yeah, more lies
America died, When Bush lied

And talk about mir'cles, did you see how they fell,
the three towers in New York, those charges worked well
Flattened out in a straight line, just like it was planned
Did you think we were so stupid that we wouldn't understand
And it's a pity about the folks there on Flight 93,
Just as they took back control, you blew them to smithereens

You lied, You lied
Heroes died, when Bush lied

You say Osama is living in a place you have traced
But you don't go and get him, it seems such a waste
Could it be it's because he's still one of your men
A C-I-A asset just like he was then
He endorsed your campaign in a last minute pitch
Is he just one more man who has gotten quite rich

From your lies, Your lies
Freedom died, from your lies

How about those Israelis dancing to their success,
On the rooftops of Jersey, they created a mess
So you sent them back home with a slap on the wrist
Told the cops not to bother, 'cause they don't exist

It's a lie, You lied
Justice died, when you lied

Now people are dying through your crimes in Iraq
You've killed more than Saddam, though you don't care to keep track
Cause they're only some Arabs in a faraway land
That Yahweh has promised to his chosen band
While Sharon and his cronies pull on your strings
When he opens his mouth your whole government sings

His lies, His lies
Palestinians die, With Bush lies

Next time you talk to your God, I've got a question for him
What side is he on or does it change on a whim'
There's a whole lot of people, suff'rin here in his name
What kind of pyscho is he that he's playing this game
It sounds more like the devil is guiding your hand
Destruction and death are the plagues of the land

of your lies, your lies
Children die, When Bush lies

You see, Mr President, there's something amiss
Two elections you lost, but you overcame this
By rigging the vote, not counting the blacks
You've ensured two full terms, the dry drunk is back
And now they're changing the laws to get you a third
The brown shirts are charging at the front of the herd

of your lies, your lies
Democracy dies, When Bush lies

The question remains what can we do about this
Most people refuse to consider this list
They're lost in illusion, can't recognise proof
so we offer this song to all who stand for the truth

No more lies, No more lies
Must we all die, Because of your lies

No more lies, No more lies
Must we all die, Because of your lies

Your lies...