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Poacher Minor Poster
Joined: 16 Sep 2006 Posts: 72 Location: South East UK
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andyb Validated Poster
Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 1025 Location: SW London
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:42 am Post subject: |
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Great poster, would just fiddle around with the text slightly.
I'd take the 'and' out at the beggining of the 3rd paragraph, I would go
"No other steel framed building has ever collapsed from fire in near freefall speed"
Also you say int he first line that we are told that 'we are told this builidng collapsed from the impact of a plane and an hour of fire' The NIST report actually says that the plane impact did not weaken the structure significantly. We have really been told it was the fire, although NIST cannot model temperatures higher than around 600degerees in very isolated ares.
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Andrew Johnson Mighty Poster
Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 1919 Location: Derbyshire
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 10:07 am Post subject: |
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This is a good, eye-catching poster. I think the wording could be changed "at freefall speed", but it doesn't matter that much - you have the essence of it to catch people's attention.
I had a similar idea too....
http://www.nineeleven.co.uk/board/viewtopic.php?t=4721
Doesn't look as professional as yours, but I tried to pare the message down!
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